Kia ora Ayah. I have looked at your blog today and like the way you present your work so clearly. I like the colours behind your 'sounds' poem and I think your Anzac poem describes war very well. A little idea for next time, make sure you read your work through carefully before you publish it so you know it makes sense. Keep up the good work.
Kia ora Ayah. I have looked at your blog today and like the way you present your work so clearly. I like the colours behind your 'sounds' poem and I think your Anzac poem describes war very well.
ReplyDeleteA little idea for next time, make sure you read your work through carefully before you publish it so you know it makes sense.
Keep up the good work.