Tuesday, 23 October 2018

crocodile island

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ayah, It's Porsha from Karoro school. I really like that you used exclamation marks in your writing. You used a lot of great describing words. Your writing is very detailed and great!

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  2. Hi Porsha. Its Ayah from Karoro School. Thank you for the comment.

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