Over the past few weeks we have been part of the'Get NZ Writing 'poetry project. This project aimed to get 96,000 poems written across NZ! We were sent a tin with objects in it and we used one of these objects to write poems.Here is my poem
Hi Ayah! I love all your purple gem pictures, They really add to your poem. Your Words all go together perfectly and smoothly. I like how you explained things related to it like ocean and treasure. Next time you should describe the shape of the gem.
Hi Ayah. I really enjoyed your Get NZ Writing poem. You used good 'sticky' words to describe your item from the tin. My favourite line is, 'Deep light blue rainbow.' It gives me lovely images in my mind. You also did a great job at publishing your poem on a google drawing. Beautiful!
Hi Ayah! I love all your purple gem pictures, They really add to your poem. Your Words all go together perfectly and smoothly. I like how you explained things related to it like ocean and treasure. Next time you should describe the shape of the gem.
ReplyDeleteHi Ayah. I really enjoyed your Get NZ Writing poem. You used good 'sticky' words to describe your item from the tin. My favourite line is, 'Deep light blue rainbow.' It gives me lovely images in my mind. You also did a great job at publishing your poem on a google drawing. Beautiful!
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