Thursday, 16 August 2018

The beach

We are leaning to add description words in our writing.
We are leaning to write to make the reader feel a certain way.
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  1. Anonymous27 August 2018 at 10:27

    Hello Ayah. my name is Mylah from karoro it's sad how much rubbish is on the beach maybe you could add more information about the rubbish.

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  2. Anonymous4 September 2018 at 10:10

    Hi Mylah I go to Karoro School it is sad how much rubbish is on the beach.1 I will put more information in my work next time.

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